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Friday, June 23, 2017

The girl with the red coat

The girl with the red coat
One day there was a beautiful village called John street and then there was a beautiful girl walking in the street with her mum, the little girl had a red coat.

One morning the little girl and her mum was buying some food in the market when her mum was buying she was looking some toy in another shop and when her mom is finish shopping her mom forget her, she look all over the village but she don’t know where she going and then she cry and cry and her tears fall to her face and her eyes turned to red.

She called for help and when she called for help she saw a little girl lost too so she help her to find her mum, they went to the village and find the little girl mum.

Then when they walking they saw a man dressed in black they felt scared walking to that guy so they hide into the tree and wait to the guy and lost and when there waiting the guy lost.Then when they watching the guy, the guy just get lost so they felt scared there teeth was wiggling and there was so scared so they run and run.

Then when they run they saw the forest and they go into the forest find what to eat and then they stop, they saw a beautiful house full of plant they knock to the door they said “anybody here” then an old women open the door “Hello are you lost” said the old woman, “yes” the two little girl said, “come in don’t be shy” said the old women, the old women feed the two little girl a porridge the  the two little girl said “thank you”too the old women, the old women let them go out in the forest “bye!” the old women said, “ thank you for the porridge and bye”said the two little girl and then they walk out to the forest and find their mom’s they walk to the village find their mom’s.

10min later

The two little girl poor walking in the village finding their mom’s and when they walking they saw their mom’s calling their names their mom’s was too worried to them and when their mom’s saw them there mom’s cried and hug them.

The End

1 comment:

  1. Hi Alliah,
    I like when you started your introduction and when you started your story keep up the good work

    ReplyDelete

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