Adrift
Hi my name is Annie and one day I was up in the beautiful blue sky in my house riding on a big, enormous whale. I’m at home doing nothing, looking through my window and just talking to myself.
While I was looking through my window, I saw a bird flying up in the sky and I wish I could fly to I said to myself. Then when I’m looking outside looking at the bird, it gave me a shock when it passed my window. The bird said “come with me” and I said don’t go, just wait i’m coming. So I followed the bird and opened my door.
I look around and found the bird and I saw a house and any minutes I came at the tree and I sit down to the tree and waiting, then I saw a boy coming for me so I hide behind at the tree. He slept down so I help him
Then I said to the boy “any second’s the thunder will come” and the boy look at his floating house and flick his goggles and he flew away and I said don’t go. Then I’m sad again so I came at my house then I was looking at my door outside then I look at the bird and the bird fell the rope for me and I run to get the rope I smiling at the boy and Then I just accidentally fell the rope and I run faster than I could just to get the rope.
Then when I catching the rope I fell down then I get the rope and I look at the tree and I plan to tie the rope at tree then my plan works and the boy was so happy because I help him and he he smile at me and we became friends.
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