W.A.L.T we are learning about cinqauin
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, November 10, 2017
Friday, October 27, 2017
All about me
W.A.L.T We are learning to present are self by doing a slide
Manawatū Gorge
W.A.L.T We are learning to look for facts to Manawatū Gorge
Friday, September 8, 2017
20 things you should say more often
We watched a video clip of a little boy telling us 20 things we should say more often.We made our own.this is our video.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2j5Y5O24-f9azQ2X1NWVEttdmM/view
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2j5Y5O24-f9azQ2X1NWVEttdmM/view
Trash To fashion
Friday, July 28, 2017
The persistent pigeons
The persistent pigeons
Once upon a time there was a busy street called Pigeon Street and there’s a house with a lot people in there and they didn’t know that they had a baby pigeon in their roof of their house.
Then one day the three birds were so sleepy and hungry so the three birds had a challenge they said “Whoever mum gives food is the winner. So they called their mum 10 times but their mum didn’t come up so they were so sleepy and hungry.
Then the 3rd pigeon saw a cupcake so he called his brothers and then the other baby pigeon was so scared at
the height so they said “come down you scared little boy” so the baby pigeon said that to him so he jumped down.
Then they walked to the cupcake and jumped and tried to get it but they couldn’t get it so their big brother had a plan and they just talked it about. Then their brother said to jump on each other and try to get the cupcake but their plan didn't work so they had a plan B to get the cupcake they made a seesaw to get up to the cupcake so the two pigeons jumped on the seesaw and their brother jumped up to the cupcake but their brother failed.
Then the 3 pigeons went to their nest because they couldn’t reach the cupcake so they were so hungry and sleepy in their nest until their mum came. Their mum gave them some worms so they were sad because they didn’t want a worm they wanted a cupcake.
Telling the time
Thursday, July 6, 2017
The Marshmallow challange
Skittle and water
Friday, June 30, 2017
Clear Slime experiment
Alma
Alma
I was skipping down the road full of snow and when I was skipping, I saw a black board full of names so I wrote my name Alma. Then there was a sound coming down in the doll shop so I turn around and look at the shop. I saw a doll so I walk to the shop and look to the shop’s window and I saw a doll like me. When I’m looking to my cloth, the doll just got lost to the table so I look to the window if the doll is in there and look to the door and I saw the doll and I try to open the door and it doesn't open it so I felt angry so I threw a snowball to the door and when I threw the snowball to the door. The door just got open and when the door got open I walk into the doll shop and get the doll. When I look to the another doll my doll move to the another shelf so I try to get it but I can’t so I take my gloves off and get the doll and I touch it but the doll get me inside and I try to get out to the doll’s body but I can’t get out so I look all over the doll move and there’s another victim don don don.
The End,
Friday, June 23, 2017
The girl with the red coat
The girl with the red coat
One day there was a beautiful village called John street and then there was a beautiful girl walking in the street with her mum, the little girl had a red coat.
One morning the little girl and her mum was buying some food in the market when her mum was buying she was looking some toy in another shop and when her mom is finish shopping her mom forget her, she look all over the village but she don’t know where she going and then she cry and cry and her tears fall to her face and her eyes turned to red.
She called for help and when she called for help she saw a little girl lost too so she help her to find her mum, they went to the village and find the little girl mum.
Then when they walking they saw a man dressed in black they felt scared walking to that guy so they hide into the tree and wait to the guy and lost and when there waiting the guy lost.Then when they watching the guy, the guy just get lost so they felt scared there teeth was wiggling and there was so scared so they run and run.
Then when they run they saw the forest and they go into the forest find what to eat and then they stop, they saw a beautiful house full of plant they knock to the door they said “anybody here” then an old women open the door “Hello are you lost” said the old woman, “yes” the two little girl said, “come in don’t be shy” said the old women, the old women feed the two little girl a porridge the the two little girl said “thank you”too the old women, the old women let them go out in the forest “bye!” the old women said, “ thank you for the porridge and bye”said the two little girl and then they walk out to the forest and find their mom’s they walk to the village find their mom’s.
10min later
The two little girl poor walking in the village finding their mom’s and when they walking they saw their mom’s calling their names their mom’s was too worried to them and when their mom’s saw them there mom’s cried and hug them.
The End
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Friday, May 26, 2017
Adrift
Adrift
Hi my name is Annie and one day I was up in the beautiful blue sky in my house riding on a big, enormous whale. I’m at home doing nothing, looking through my window and just talking to myself.
While I was looking through my window, I saw a bird flying up in the sky and I wish I could fly to I said to myself. Then when I’m looking outside looking at the bird, it gave me a shock when it passed my window. The bird said “come with me” and I said don’t go, just wait i’m coming. So I followed the bird and opened my door.
I look around and found the bird and I saw a house and any minutes I came at the tree and I sit down to the tree and waiting, then I saw a boy coming for me so I hide behind at the tree. He slept down so I help him
Then I said to the boy “any second’s the thunder will come” and the boy look at his floating house and flick his goggles and he flew away and I said don’t go. Then I’m sad again so I came at my house then I was looking at my door outside then I look at the bird and the bird fell the rope for me and I run to get the rope I smiling at the boy and Then I just accidentally fell the rope and I run faster than I could just to get the rope.
Then when I catching the rope I fell down then I get the rope and I look at the tree and I plan to tie the rope at tree then my plan works and the boy was so happy because I help him and he he smile at me and we became friends.
The End
Thursday, May 18, 2017
Buster the Boxer
Buster the Boxer
Once upon a time I’m a boxer and my name is Buster that want to jump at the amazing trampoline. I’m at home looking at my owner jumping up and down on her bed and by the way my owners name is Annie. Annie’s mum came at her room and her mum said “ goodnight “ Then her mum kiss in her head and she fell asleep.
Then her dad was working outside for his gift to his daughter. Then after his work at the trampoline we’re inside watching television and I saw a two foxes climbing and jumping at the trampoline they having fun then they saw a skunk and they jump then the squirrel came to jump too and I’m so jealous that they were jumping in the trampoline.
Then in the morning Annie was in hurry and her mum and dad showed the trampoline and her dad opened the door slowly, Annie was so shocked and she ran fast. Then I zoom as fast as I could at the trampoline and jumped on the trampoline and Annie was shocked and her mum and dad too. I’m jumping at trampoline and barking I am so happy.
Monday, May 15, 2017
Exploring Blogs
We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.
We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.
Reffection
Thursday, May 11, 2017
The Somalia
The Somalia
At 06:51 in the morning, I’m awake, I’m at the cargo ship drinking my coffee looking at the pretty ocean and by the way my job at the ship is a captain and my name is John. I’m looking at the ocean I saw a little boat coming at our cargo ship so I felt nervous about it.
Then my crew hear someone was rushing and my crew saw some pirate’s and they want to get our cargo ship because it’s big. Then the pirates turn to a group and First they came at the cooking area eating our food. Then they go at the fixing area and they came at my driving space, I’m so scared and I can’t talk to them. Then the other pirate said that he is the new captain and he get my captain hat and he said give the key so I give the key then all my crew get out off in side at the ship .
Then a pirate opened the cargo and they said where’s the stuff? Then the robot came out at the cargo and the pirate’s felt scared by the robot. They ran around the ship and captured all the pirates and everything was safe once again
Thursday, May 4, 2017
Adventure are the pits!
Adventure are the pits
One day I’m at the kids playground playing because my mum likes buying things. She left me here. Then I saw a slide so I came there and I look down at the slide and I felt nervous because I’m scared at high and scared taking slide. Then I take deep breath and count to 3 and slide down. I scream slide down at the balls pits.
Then after I slid at the balls pits, I kind the feel something in my face and I feel a lollipop stuck at my cheeks. I pull it away from my face and I bump my head at the ball pits then I look at the top and I felt scared so I step back and I saw really down hole I felt scared falling down at the hole.
Then I climb up at the balls pits then I try to jump at other balls pits then I accidentally step at the color and break it I felt nervous and I kept climbing but I saw the band aid its it’s gonna fell at my nose I try took it off and I almost fell down and I hold at the lollipop and I thought I’m gonna fell down. Then I try to climb with the lollipop stick and my plan works so I kept climbing at to the top. Then I made to the top thanks to my lollipop and I look at the lollipop and I eat it I’m so happy because I made at to the top.
THE END!!
Thursday, April 13, 2017
Beyond the lines
Beyond the lines
Once upon a time me and my little brother were in bed and my grandpa was telling a story about world war one, after grandpa told us a story, I was imagining and dreaming about world war one.
Then I was in the boat with all the soldiers. The door to the boat opened.
Me and my little brother went running I’m so nervous about the gun shots.
Then we hid behind a metal piece and we saw grandpa. He was so young that day because I was imagining the whole thing. I’m just dreaming.
THE END
Friday, April 7, 2017
The Cloud
The Cloud
Once upon a time I was a kind and helpful cloud and I came at the sea and the seagulls came at me. I came to the city and looked around and I saw the people, I feel happy because they can travel in the world like me. Then I looked around at the city and I saw a tall building like a glass.
But I have a problem I’m not like the other clouds because the wind did not command me. I came through the traffic light and the people saw me glowing red, yellow and green, the people are Confused as they are driving.
I saw a dog and It was shocked by the wires and the dog barked at me, I’m so scared so I had to get away from it. Then I saw a girl looking at me, the girl is in a long building it was on fire. The rain was not putting it out so they looked at me, I put it out and the firefighters said good job cloudy, I’m so happy that I helped them. I went back to the sea and up into the sky. You see I’m not just a cloud.
THE END…
Thank you for reading it and hope you like it ❤❤
Friday, March 31, 2017
Tom Trueheart
Tom Trueheart
Once upon a time I was in a creepy dark forest. I got my special sword to save my six brothers and the princess bride. There’s nobody in the forest. I’m trying to find my six brothers and the princess bride.
It was snowy that day and it’s freezing that day. It was a long story about my six brothers and the princess bride lost. But I got a problem, I’m just a size of a thumb and I don’t know what to do. Even I’m just a size of a thumb, I need to save my brothers and the princess bride.
Then I see a cave that looks so spooky. I feel nervous walking on the cave because if something in there like bear snake or something else
Then after I got to the cave. I came to the snowy hill but I can’t go up because I slipped and slipped on the snowy hill so I got a long branch to get up the hills.
Then I see a house. I came in the house, it’s so warm in there. Then I see a bed so I just go a little nap on the bed.
Then after I finish a nap I stand up and clean the house and I get out the house.
Then after I go out to the house I need to walk a long time and finding my six brother and the princess bride.
I was walking and Then I saw a tall castle and I looked at the window then I saw the princess and my six brothers is in the castle. I saw a guard outside in the castle with crocodile and some dragons so I walk slowly and turn around in the castle and get up at the castle.
I got a rope out of my bag and I turned the rope around and flicked it to the top of the castle. Then I climb up to the top of the castle until I’m at the window and I saw my six brothers and the princess bride and I snuck out of the window and I cut the rope from their hands. Then we snuck out to the castle and get out there.
Then after we get out of the castle we walk a long time to go on the snowy hills and the creepy cave and the princess bride is so scared in the cave , I said that you'll be all right and we walk again to go home.
The End
Thanks for reading it, hope you like it ❤❤
Friday, March 17, 2017
Spencer Park trip
Spencer Park trip
Last Friday all of the year 6 - 3 went to Spencer Park.We needed to pay $2 at the office. Then the Teachers split us into 4 groups.
My Group was Group 4. In Group 4 my friends were there. In the bus I sat at the back and no one spoke to me. After we got off the bus, Mr. Scott wanted to say he told us to show respect our School and respect others.
When we were almost there I felt happy. I loved going to Spencer Park.
First we went on the playground me and my friends played something that was fun.
Then after we finished playing we walked to the beach. After we finished walking on the beach we needed to listen to the instructions. We needed to find a shell and something we needed then after we finish finding shells we need to eat our morning tea then after we finish eat are morning tea we can played on sand.
After we played on the sand or finding shells we needed to lined up on the sand and listened to the Teacher we needed to walked to play ground to the bird thing I don’t remember the name. Then we walked 25 minutes to go the bird thing we’re the little house with stairs.
Then after we’re finish we needed to go up to the stair from the little house after we go on the little house are Teacher took a picture of the little house and my groups after we finish on the house thing.
We need to go on the playground and eat our lunch after I finished eating my lunch Mr. Scott whistled and we finished playing so we down on the grass. After we got on the bus we needed to sit on the grass with our fruit and we needed to listen to the instructions. We got on the bus and I sat by my friends. We had an amazing day at Spencer Park.
THE END.
Thank you for reading and hope you like it ❤❤
Tuesday, March 14, 2017
My Learning Goals 2017
This is are my learning goal 2017, I shared this with my mum and dad and I feel nervous. My parents felt good about it.
I hope you like it bye! ❤
I hope you like it bye! ❤
Wednesday, March 8, 2017
My Learning in our school
Last week Mr. Maddren talked to use about be in the right place in the right time. this is being Cyber Smart. We then had to create a DLO to show our new learning It can also teach other how to be safe online .
It's important to make good decisions when working online making sure your on the correct website, so you can be safe.
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