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Thursday, July 25, 2019

Writing MY own SONG!

Hello guys so at hurumanu we made a song. My song contains a lot of nonsense and I think everyone would relate to it because a lot of us like foods and you guys know there is a lot of simple people especially me would kinda relate to this song. So guys here is my song but I will warn you this song really doesn't make no sense and please I don't want no harm anyone.

Title: FOOD

Verse 1
Writing, Crying don't know where to go
I'm here all alone
I'm still haven't find the right food to eat...
I once see you but now you're gone
my food, my only food is gone...

Chorus
I've lost you when I'm doing chores
I forgot where I put you 
Now I'm here writing a song about you.
You're my love, my only love  
You're my food that I only love
and there is nothing stopping eating you.

Verse 2
 Hey you yes you, you bring the life of my tummy
 I loved you very much
 but since I've lost you
I've been alone in the dark. 
Without eating you I'm lost  and I'm here finding myself

The song inspired me to not be ashamed about yourself you can eat all you want and no one can stop you except money. the metaphor and the simile here are difficult to explain because it's all about food and writing this song so it's hard to explain. The only metaphor I know is "Without eating you I'm lost and finding myself" you might ask how is that a metaphor, well  I can find myself so that's why I picked this metaphor. Writing the song was really hard because I can't think of any ideas to write and I think lots of writers would understand because they put a lot of effort into their songs and I know how hard to write a song.

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