story boards for stop motion

What advice were you given?
the advice they give was "I like how you put lots of info in this. it makes me remember about my grandmother, maybe you could finish your storyboard story." so the advice was helpful and positive, if we could finish our animation I would listen to there advice and some peoples advice what could be helpful to our storyboard. So our story is about that every single person can die even your grandmother and mother, the story is about that the world spins and everyday people can die every single hour minute second and every single day so me and my team planned a sad story about this. The art we did is not finish and I can't take photo so I have to barrow my team's picture.