This morning, the teachers told us that we are going to the back garden/compost. We have to get a plastic bag and gloves this helps us to not get dirty while cleaning up, while we are cleaning up some students find worms and spiders its pretty disgusting so....let them be. As soon as we have finished we have to wash our hands, period 3 we have to now go clean at the sides at backfield and when we're cleaning at the backfield next to the road I clean a bush and.......found a 5 dollars, I rush to the teacher and give it, but the teacher didn't keep so she just gave it to me I was full of happiness. Some of the people saw me holding the 5 dollars they all asking me "omg can I have it" and I told them "uhhhh Nah" and they are pretty sad. here is some of the picture that they took by the teachers.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, February 27, 2019
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Hello Alliah,
ReplyDeletenice job getting 5 dollars. Maybe you could say "found 5 dollars" instead of "found a 5 dollars". you could also "but the teacher didn't keep it so" instead of "but the teacher didn't keep so". apart from that. AMAZING JOB!
thank you Emily for the amazing comment!
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