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Wednesday, February 27, 2019

Tane Mahuta

This morning, the teachers told us that we are going to the back garden/compost. We have to get a plastic bag and gloves this helps us to not get dirty while cleaning up, while we are cleaning up some students find worms and spiders its pretty disgusting so....let them be. As soon as we have finished we have to wash our hands, period 3 we have to now go clean at the sides at backfield and when we're cleaning at the backfield next to the road I clean a bush and.......found a 5 dollars, I rush to the teacher and give it, but the teacher didn't keep so she just gave it to me I was full of happiness. Some of the people saw me holding the 5 dollars they all asking me "omg can I have it" and I told them "uhhhh Nah" and they are pretty sad. here is some of the picture that they took by the teachers.

 













                                         

         

2 comments:

  1. Hello Alliah,
    nice job getting 5 dollars. Maybe you could say "found 5 dollars" instead of "found a 5 dollars". you could also "but the teacher didn't keep it so" instead of "but the teacher didn't keep so". apart from that. AMAZING JOB!

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    1. thank you Emily for the amazing comment!

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