This Monday we clean our home because my dad was not in he 's work because my dad was feel sick and we are playing chrome book or watching TV and said my dad come with me we are pick up my mom in work and we in the Eco shop to by some thing and my mom see a barbie it 's beauty full and we go in my mommy friend and we play my friend name is Venita and my brother friend is John Ray . This Tuesday we are so early because my dad was going in he's work and we going again in my mom friend to we not lose because if we are in the house my brother was going in the out side of house and we don't have some food and we not save . in the down is picture of my barbie
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Hi Alliah, great to see you blogging over the holidays! Did you go to the Eco shop of Blenheim road? That place is huge! That was cool that you could get a new Barbie.
ReplyDeleteHi Alliah. I like how you wrote what you did in the holidays, it's nice to see someone doing something cool in the holidays. I know English is not your first language but some of your sentences don't make sence. By the way I loved it.
ReplyDeletethank you Kiesha for saying that to me but sorry for that wrote but it's ok. : ( or : )
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